Moon at a Distance

Glowing beams

life filled light

making earth

seem

heavenly bright

starting time

open soul

moon beams

grow

nobody knows

trace flickers

standing still

moon beams

on a cold

window sill

touch and hold

hug and kiss

moon beam

so heavenly

touching souls

brilliantly 

Reviews

[CaptainBill]

Holly, your creative output is impressive !

I like how 'moon beams' provides your structure for stanzas.

Your poem captures that very nice feeling of basking in moonlight.

Well done!

[Holly Mason]

thank you so much for reading Captain Bill ,truly

[DeCipher]

I love watching the moon at night. This was a cool way to describe it. Thanks

[Holly Mason]

well thank you for reading!!!my home now has no direct window to the moon...I lose my breath with window wishes*)

[DeCipher]

Haha, Yeah I would too.

[Jack...]

I am daily enchanted by the moon, I stood outside this morning gazing upon my friend. Now I find your poem enchants me too. very nice.

[Holly Mason]

thank you words can be very enchanting hope your mother travels safely if at all

[Carissa Marie]

Lovely poem. I love how you depict the moon. :)

[Holly Mason]

well thank you the moon and sun touch all of our lands at different times*)
thank you for reading

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful and moving piece, capturing all the beauty and mystery of our neighbours light

[Holly Mason]

thank you much the moon is the most beautiful thing to me
like a good neighbor...moon beams are there!hahah don't tell State-Farm

[Distant horizons]

:-)