Why am I hungover?

a porch

a rocker

and the

setting 

of the

sun

reaching 

for a 

falling star

fell off

of the rocker

onto

the porch

and the rising

of the

sun

Author's Note

that's why...*)
Sunday fun

Reviews

[Pete Langley]

Amazing how the world seems to revolve at a different speed after a drink or five, throwing you of kilter, isn`t it Holly? A dizzy piece! P.

[Samuel Dickens]

I'm not proud of it, but I did that once. In my case, no rocking chair was needed--just gravity.

[Holly Mason]

gravity an adult drinks best friend...obviously it was comic relief night
thank you for reading

[sithlordjp]

That made me smile! A fun read, and yet some thought provoking ideas under this unique structure... Well done!

[Holly Mason]

I think a porch and a rocker are calling out names...you are on the list*)
thank you so much for reading beam or captain they are both good men hahhah

[emmajoy]

Sunday fun is often the best fun, the day you have time to see more clearly but then, maybe not in this case! Love the way your words drip down the page .. clever, graphic piece of writing. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much for your kind comments....I love Sundays even if hungover*)
thank you so much

[rootsandwingsmemoirs.co..]

This made me laugh. Very humorously written. I like it! :)

[Holly Mason]

well sometimes a laugh is good especially when hungover*)thank you much for reading

[Lily Mae]

Best hangover ever.. beautifully penned..xo

[Holly Mason]

fun to write*)and thank you much for reading

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think you are drunk on nature, and that is one of the best highs, next to being drunk on love.

[Holly Mason]

I am high on life...have a good Monday

[Tree]

Had to smile to myself when I read this. The way you structured the poem guides the reader along with the speaker. All the way to the floor of that porch. Truly enjoyed this, Holly

[Holly Mason]

well thank you much kind sir truly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this was fun...i like how the poem came back around within itself.

[Holly Mason]

well thank you sir really appreciate your comments always