Slinky

unwinds

  itself

   all

     the

       way

          down

                but

                  once 

               the

           bottom 

         is

     hit

      never 

        again

          does

             it

                 fit

              so

        tangled

      like

  love

    work

       through

            the

                pain

         untangling

       loves

   slinky

     will

       help

         keep

           you 

             sane.

                          

Reviews

[James Grizzly Jones]

very nice

[Holly Mason]

lovely photo thank you so much for reading*)

[Frieda P]

Very clever, if only love were as simple as uncoiling a slinky...

[Holly Mason]

damn slinky's*)_ thank you

[Henry Pepper]

Very creative. I always do enjoy a good metaphor

[Holly Mason]

thank you much

[lee von cleef]

But it may rust in the rain, mine did.

[Holly Mason]

yup old school slinky's always rust but they were reliable*)

[The Gero]

that's a nice swirly thing - clever.

[Holly Mason]

word fun...thanks for swirling*)

[Nemesis G]

I love it, it's so inventive. I loved the playfulness of it, it made me smile. Thank you for sharing.

[Holly Mason]

you are very welcome...slinky fun on a mid-week day*)

[Nemesis G]

Too rights, after the day I've had I needed something to make me smile :)