Sun Lilly's

Here is where the light fairy's play

coming with a soft song to lay

sun lilly by the flowing stream

fairy light with her body beam

rays of peaceful ribbon light

wrapping the stars with delight

fluttering wings of paradise

sun lilly fairy's shine on tonight

she whispers a dust of fairy breath

so long sun lilly for fairy death

and with no light for fairy's shine

no sun lilly could be divine

Author's Note

sorry about proper punctuation etc. this just felt right

Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

great flow. its pulls your reader through the piece excellently.

[Holly Mason]

thank you sir*)

[Drowning In Reality]

Really nice poem, especially for the coming spring. Well done!

[Holly Mason]

thank you much truly and I am expecting 5-10 inches of snow tonight...spring hop on in!!!*)

[ms. barrie]

this is simply a ethereal beautiful poem, one that delights the reader's imagination into a delightful, serene fantasy, where one does not want to leave, when this write unfortunately ends. Wonderful use of imagery and meter. Brilliantly penned! Thanks for sharing :)

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for those kind words Holly

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, Holly :)

[POOR BOY D]

Your poetry is a beautiful heart that shepherds a soul of wisdom

[Holly Mason]

thank you truly for your kind comments

[redflutterby]

Really love this. I have a small book of poetry about fairies somewhere that was a gift many years ago. Now I want to find it!!! This was beautiful with an essence of sadness at the end. :-)

[Holly Mason]

thank you for visiting where the light fairy's play truly

[marie m gale]

i really enjoyed reading this thankyou x

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for reading*)

[Akleja]

This is so beautiful... I can picture it as a song, sung to children and or just on a hot spring day... Thank you for sharing this work of art!

[Holly Mason]

thank you young lady I love the pictures you have when reading truly

[Moniba]

Beautiful :)

[Holly Mason]

thank you so very much...truly

[Moniba]

You're welcome!

[Pax]

very beautiful ms. Holly... the fine rhyme makes it like a songs... you had springkle fairy dust in your words thats seems so magical.. Wonderful!

[Holly Mason]

fairy dust is the only kind of dust I let in my home*)thank you much for reading

[Veronica Chandler]

If it feels right...it is right, I really enjoyed the flow of this lovely piece especially without the punctuation. It feels like warm sunshine on my face, and lifts my spirit.

[Holly Mason]

nothing like warm sunshine on your face*)thank you so for reading