Sun Lilly's

Here is where the light fairy's play

coming with a soft song to lay

sun lilly by the flowing stream

fairy light with her body beam

rays of peaceful ribbon light

wrapping the stars with delight

fluttering wings of paradise

sun lilly fairy's shine on tonight

she whispers a dust of fairy breath

so long sun lilly for fairy death

and with no light for fairy's shine

no sun lilly could be divine

Author's Note

sorry about proper punctuation etc. this just felt right

Reviews

[john alan willox]

pretty needs no punctuation - and this is very pretty... very pretty indeed.

[Holly Mason]

thank you truly

[Pete Langley]

This is a delightful whimsy of a poem, Holly. Thoroughly enjoyable. P.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you fine sir much

[Pete Langley]

I thought I might mention that tha UK spelling of your lilly is lily. P

[Holly Mason]

I thank you for that sir but my lilly is a little girl...I took care of her I was her light fairy I have had to move far away and I worry for her so...her mommy is anything but a light fairy I have had many foster children but she was special a gifted soccer girl now she can no longer get to practice mommy and the drinking and different men every day have stopped all that was good-my little lilly is no longer divine

[Pete Langley]

This is so sad, sweetheart. There is no justice in this world. So sorry. P.

[Holly Mason]

I am trying to get her here...but I do not believe it will happen her mommy loves her monthly checks...I have not shared the true meaning of this writing with anyone you are special!!

[Pete Langley]

So sweet. Hope it all works out. P

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is very sweet and dreamy reminds me of childhood imaginings.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you so for reading

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Muse]

This was charming. It put me in that "special-place" serene and delicate imagery you have penned.

[Holly Mason]

thank you for your lovely words and I am feelin the shoes*)

[Muse]

what size to you wear..I share with my girlfriends. ;)

[Holly Mason]

I buy two pair of shoes for the year*)one set good dang boots and one pair of earth sandals I could never walk in those sexy shoes*)but maybe it would fun to try

[Muse]

I could never wear them for real either..but it would be FUN to try. lol

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful and enchanting with a touch of sadness to it. I think you wrote this just perfect. It works wonderfully.

[Holly Mason]

thank you for reading truly

[kelvin]

A nicely written read here, for its a beautiful environment that you bring to light here. As always keep writing fellow writer again nice read.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so and I enjoyed your ending sentiment-keep writing truly a nice thought*)

[kelvin]

You're very welcome, we must encourage each other to keep the pen or pencil in motion

[Mariam]

wonderful flow,simply beautiful and I agree, it doesn't need punctuation here, just like a song of nature :)Thanks for sharing

[Holly Mason]

thank you for enjoying and stopping by truly

[zainul]

Very lovely piece
Charmed my heart.

[Holly Mason]

Good because guilt only enjoys the cold*)*)*)thank you so for reading

[zainul]

*)*)*)

[Constance Payne]

"and with no light for fairy's shine
no sun lilly could be divine"

Such Beauty, showing how in our tiny and not so tiny ways we all affect one another.

There are times that "proper" gets in the way, this would have been one of those times....Wonderful.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for your kind words...

[the raven's scream]

I love the line ''she whispers a dust of fairy breath''
The words give great imagination and somehow the poem makes me want summer so much! Nicely done! :)

[Holly Mason]

with a dust of fairy breath...I thank you*)