Sun Lilly's

Here is where the light fairy's play

coming with a soft song to lay

sun lilly by the flowing stream

fairy light with her body beam

rays of peaceful ribbon light

wrapping the stars with delight

fluttering wings of paradise

sun lilly fairy's shine on tonight

she whispers a dust of fairy breath

so long sun lilly for fairy death

and with no light for fairy's shine

no sun lilly could be divine

Author's Note

sorry about proper punctuation etc. this just felt right

Reviews

[Areeba]

This is AMAZING!!!

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much*)

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful,

[Holly Mason]

thank you I know Iike to play with words but poetry is also in my soul!*)

[Trigorin]

Not bad - one little quibble: very last word should be 'divine', unless you're trying to make a play on someone named 'Devine', but that wouldn't make much sense considering the rest of the poem. You've expressed yourself beautifully here and I do agree with you, it does feel right. Well done.

[Holly Mason]

thank you much correction in place...and thank you for your kind words