Sun Lilly's

Here is where the light fairy's play

coming with a soft song to lay

sun lilly by the flowing stream

fairy light with her body beam

rays of peaceful ribbon light

wrapping the stars with delight

fluttering wings of paradise

sun lilly fairy's shine on tonight

she whispers a dust of fairy breath

so long sun lilly for fairy death

and with no light for fairy's shine

no sun lilly could be divine

Author's Note

sorry about proper punctuation etc. this just felt right

Reviews

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This is a very good poem! I enjoyed reading it!(: I like the rhythm and how it flowed nicely!

[Holly Mason]

thank you much young lady*)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

:)

[Frieda P]

This one just dances in delight...it's a smile on the page. Sweet.

[Holly Mason]

see I am not always over the edge no wait I am never mind*)
but thank you very much

[Frieda P]

Lol, I like you!

[Holly Mason]

liking you as well...

[Frieda P]

I needed to be tickled so I had to come back and read this again, it's even better the more you read it :-)

[Holly Mason]

aaawww and look this is where we first decided we liked eachother*)

[Frieda P]

Lol, I liked you before that, I just didn't make a public annnouncement ;-)

[RachelReaper]

very pretty poem, it reminded me of springtime, or the summer.. I've always been fascinated with fairies and it interests me to read something that involves them.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so much every one should have a body beam*)

[RachelReaper]

:)

[An Ordinary Woman]

oh very nice! loves the lightness and airy feel of it. Perfect!

[Holly Mason]

thank you much for reading

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Lovely poem...the faeries dance barefoot in the moss around here often leaving fairy rings...of course it's a bit cold this time of year for them. (smile)

[Holly Mason]

thank you much for reading everything needs fairy light*)

[Relic]

The meter in this is one of the best I've seen in a long time. The story itself is excellent. This is an awesome piece of poetry. Nice writing for sure.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much..this is special to me

[Relic]

You're welcome.

[steppenwolf]

Ooooh. I love this. Don't worry about punctuation, it's fine the way it is.

[Holly Mason]

I love writing creative...but out of everything I have put on this site this is my favorite and is special to me so thank you for appreciating

[steppenwolf]

I can see how and why it's your favorite!

[Nemesis G]

This is such a sweet and sad poem, I enjoyed reading it thank you for sharing it was beautifully written.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much

[sithlordjp]

Hi Holly! I enjoyed reading your words. An entire life cycle in the span of a day... A snapshot of everything that passes us by, things we miss, things we should stop to appreciate... Love the tone and spirit of the whole piece. Well done, and thanks for sharing!

[Jack...]

This is a beautiful and sad tale about the little fairy and how the sunlight affects her. My mind created pictures as I read this piece. Nice one Holly.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you sir....

[Jack...]

You are welcome, Ma'am