Sun Lilly's

Here is where the light fairy's play

coming with a soft song to lay

sun lilly by the flowing stream

fairy light with her body beam

rays of peaceful ribbon light

wrapping the stars with delight

fluttering wings of paradise

sun lilly fairy's shine on tonight

she whispers a dust of fairy breath

so long sun lilly for fairy death

and with no light for fairy's shine

no sun lilly could be divine

Author's Note

sorry about proper punctuation etc. this just felt right

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

I think it's wonderful. Your imagery is beautiful. I wanted to find my own sun lily. ; )

[s y e]

This is a fandabby write Holly! I loved it and the imagery was amazing!

[Holly Mason]

thank you little princess*)

[Stella Armour]

it read very well and i enjoyed the images very much Holly...

[Holly Mason]

Thank you Miss Stella...Lilly is a little girl that I did a lot for I had to move and I worry greatly about her...the mom loves her checks and custody could not be won...sadly she recently hurt my Lilly ...burnt her...and her little brother...sorry for sharing that...she is my sun Lilly and always will be
thank you fine lady

[xxlheart]

it felt very write, should be said/read in one breath. a wonderfully creative piece

[Holly Mason]

like the felt very write, much!
thank you for reading all in one breath...like that also*)

[xxlheart]

had to make you smile somehow ~L~ my eyes are exhausted but lungs are good :)

[alinamironova]

I love your note, 'this just felt right', it shows the true meaning of poetry, and how you can write from your heart and end up with a beautiful poem! Well done :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Your work is like an egyptian silk it smooth and indulging when you started reading it untill the end of the story. Good work Holly.

[Holly Mason]

Thank you kind sir

[Mauricio Montoya]

been there done that its got flow sounds good.
nice work.

[AYVID N]

Awesome... such pretty images conjured here.

This poem is full of beautiful imagery and child-like in freshness and innocence. The Sun Lilly Fairy would appeal to all age groups! Very magical too !

[Holly Mason]

I tend to write a little different I am having writing fun with word smiles all around...this is my favorite I originally wrote it to just show that I can write meter but then I play where the light fairy's play*)*)*)thank you so for your kind words truly

[AYVID N]

The ease and flair with which it is written comes through...as does the fact that you must have enjoyed writing this. That's exactly why the reader enjoys it so much too.

You are welcome.

[Androglossia]

Your words here are breathtaking it took me to that magical place you so beautifully created. Very beautiful and this is going into my favorites:)

[Holly Mason]

thank you for your kind words

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome!

[PurpleQuartz]

This is magical. Beautiful write.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so kindly