The Damage Is Done

YOU BAD LITTLE GIRL, 

YOU ROTTEN LITTLE _ITCH,

WHY DID I EVER HAVE YOU,

GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME,

STOP BEING YOU,

YOU ARE WORTHLESS, 

PIECE OF CRAP KID!

They know you hate them.

It will be to late soon.

Stop ,clear your view.

The damage is done.

Oh but of course,

your conscience is clear.

The kid was crappy,

you told them,

year after year.

Reviews

[Alex Falkner]

Well written, and raw.
I like it, but at the same time loathe it as I had to listen to this as a child.
Thank you for sharing.
ps: this is a GOOD review.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for felling it
p.s.you are GOOD at getting your feelings out...I have been reading*)

[Z bangbangmaxwell]

you have a gift for putting your emotions into words, at least that's the way I see it... I could be completely wrong and this just an imaginary tale, but it seems very personal, as some of your other writings do... again, very good job and thanks for shaing!

[Distant horizons]

I do hope I am reading this correctly, because i see this all the time.Parents that you have to wonder why they became parents in the first place. Screaming at kids like it's their fault the adult has made a mess of their life and it isnt going to planned. There is noting worse than seeing the look of confusion and hurt on a childs face trying to comprehend their own parents rage. I dont usually share my personal opinions, but i will on this case. people should need a licence to have children. It's no wonder some of these kids continue the cycle, having spent their formative years being screamed at. it's even more amazing when some of them turn out to be a success.
Brave and provocatve piece. please feel free to delete this if i'm offline.

[Holly Mason]

I would rather not delete this but if you would like I will*)and yes children suffer so much this is based on a lady I saw with her daughter in line at the store ...she was probably only 5 years old she was numb already blank no longer there I read once the best thing to do is distract the parent with a nice comment about their child...nothing would of distracted this mother that little girl was everything wrong in her life...I should of grabbed her and walked out the door thank you for your thoughts

[Distant horizons]

Not at all, and thank you :-)