Bad Valentine

I have a secret , sshshshs don't tell.

For I am a bad valentine going straight to hell.

My neighbors husband has been eyeing me

and I do not mind ,for I like what I see.

She is going to work. Will he sneak over?

ahh dang guess not, looks like he drove her.

The car is back ,a flirty glance sent.

Coming in the backdoor singing as he went.

Our hair is tousled ,clothes are on the floor.

When will my big strong man be back for more?

Waiting the next day and into the next,

did he forget me or just over sexed?

Staring out the window I see my attraction.

I stand up naked to gauge his reaction.

No glance, no look does he send my way.

He heads down the street different girls house today.

I will not get upset! I am sure this I deserve.

But damn I want him and this throws a curve.

Wanting to be near, I befriend his wife.

Now hitting a nerve I mess with his life.

Bad valentine, you should of kept it between us.

I told her everything, your s**t is packed ,hit the bus.

Reviews

[Dalia]

very realistic theme... making bad decisions.
nice.

[Holly Mason]

yup a real time life time for woman movie event haha thank you for reading

[Dalia]

welcome

[EileenMarie]

Oh this brought a smile to my face! Nice job!!

[Holly Mason]

than you young lady was laughin as I wrote it

[Akshita]

It's really good...loved it :)

[The Witness]

I agree with Kailor and Spitfire. Both are very true. Reminds me of the things that happen on ID. Only more murder on the tv shows. =)

[Kaylor Mason]

Women are ruthless in these matters . . . men can't compete with them

[Holly Mason]

not my cup of tea it just seemed like a good write idea thank you much

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Well done! It's so realistic too - making a bad decision, knowing it, but doing it anyway because the sensation is better than the guilt could ever be!

[Holly Mason]

thank you I tend to just write whatever comes to mind...shoulda titled it
realistic valentine hahahah thanks again

[Alicia Santos]

I love this piece. So honest. (not sure if it reigns truth in your life) but It just feels so personal and real. love love love

[Holly Mason]

not true in my life
never pick flowers in another womans garden!thank you much

[Indie Skreet]

Good bit of dark Holly ;) For me though, the last two lines seem to lose rhythm, but that doesn't take away from the sentiment which is wickedly amusing.

[Holly Mason]

thank you much I wanted those last two to be blunt let the reader know she meant it no going back no I am sorry's just hit the bus thanks again

[Holly Mason]

the line i do not like is the different girls house today it just doesn't seem to fit