Letting Go

Uhhm....this is one of my first poems....I think it was my third.Tell me what YOU think it was about.

I can't let you go, my love, my dear,
I can't move on without you near.
I think about you day and night,
For once I don't think I can win this fight.
I want to know what's a lie and what's true,
Baby all I wanna know is if it's really you.
I can't get you outta my head,
Even outta my dreams before I go to bed.
Deep down I love you and trust you with my whole heart,
Telling myself when I next wake up,
It won't be to my hopes and dreams falling apart.
I know my feelings for you run deep,
Your love, trust, and promises,
Forever will I keep.
I tell myself it's all a lie, all just a dream,
That I'll wake up with you right by my side.
I really believe my love that it is you,
That we will forever be together, my hopes and dreams coming true.

~Rachel B. Spiers~

Author's Note

Ignore mistakes...just lemme know what you think :]

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

The poignant universality of the human heart.

Your poem is lovely in its timeless simplicity.

Love makes the world go round and your poem mirrors this.

[J.Black]

Good stuff you got here.
:)

[GetTheHellOut]

It expresses how is it being in love. Good work. Keep writing.