Feelings

Okay I might have overdone the Feelings part a bit...but oh well...it was how I felt at the time....most of the poetry I put on not that long ago is more of my older stuff....so its not that bad for a 15 year old girl who has no clue what shes doing half

These feelings, feelings inside,
These feelings shoot through my side.
These feelings, feelings of hate,
These feelings force my heart to separate.
These feelings, feelings of love,
Whisper to me softly, softly as a dove.
These feelings, feelings of despair,
These feelings leave me gasping for air.
These feelings, feelings of death,
Leave me clenching to my chest.
Quietly I whisper, I whisper unto thee,
"Will these feelings ever set me free?"

~Rachel B. Spiers~

Author's Note

Ignore mistakes lol...more of my older stuff so be nice! <3 :]

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

I adore this. And it feels so familiar to read it, because I have felt that exact same mix, and you have beautifully exposed it.