Kayla or Me?

Okay theres a guy of course...heh..Josh.Thats all I have to say about that lol.

You have my armwarmers, my necklace, and my love,

I should have never fell in love with you, what have I done?

We feel a lot of sparks when we kiss,

Our world surreal, feeling nothing but bliss.

Are you real or a fake?

Was falling in love with you a big mistake?

All this wonder and confusion I cannot take,

Are you intending to be with me only, or be a snake?

I don't want to be hurt and played,

Alex hurt me bad, my heart was decayed.

But you brought it back flaring with hope and life,

For you it will feel no anger, hate, or trife.

Would you really rather be kissing Kayla then me?

Either grab my heart before it breaks, or just set it free.

Maybe I don't have the beauty and money other girls do,

But at least I love you unconditionally and appreciate you.

Maybe I'm just blind and unable to see,

Please tell me Josh, will it be Kayla or me?

~Rachel B. Spiers~

Author's Note

Ignore mistakes...comment...the usual lol...also a note...I never had an instructor or anything...this is off of my own feet and I don't follow a frame or anything cause I don't know anything about them....everything just spills out and I write it down as my heart tells it to me...so if the frame is wacko or something then that's just how it is and I'm not changing it.....because to me it's changing the feeling for me...so if it doesn't make it a poem...so be it but it's not changing :] just thought I'd add that lol.....

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Idk where you're getting that poetry has to have a format, it scholastically might but hey, this ain't college. I'd call this a poem. Anyways, back to the review... You put the pain of your emotions into this piece, I could literally feel your heart straining, on the brink of shattering. The final question, though not directed at me, still stings. This Josh guy'd start thinking about his actions if he read this I'd think.

[Wildecat]

Guy can be such jerks sometimes. Loved this poem, and hang in there you will find the right person.