Somewhere, lost
In the madness of the day
You'll find me, gathering
Windswept thoughts of you
Stuffing them down
In an already too full bag
Taking with me what I can
Even though I'm a mum and a grandmum, Mother's day this year left me with mixed feelings, having lost my own mum in February. For all those who celebrate the day, there are some who won't for a multitude of reasons. My bag too, is overflowing with memories. A touching poem Delmar and one I understand.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
That is a heavy bag to carry... you have my condolences for your loss. As always, your visit and rev.. read moreThat is a heavy bag to carry... you have my condolences for your loss. As always, your visit and review are deeply appreciated.
Even though I'm a mum and a grandmum, Mother's day this year left me with mixed feelings, having lost my own mum in February. For all those who celebrate the day, there are some who won't for a multitude of reasons. My bag too, is overflowing with memories. A touching poem Delmar and one I understand.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
That is a heavy bag to carry... you have my condolences for your loss. As always, your visit and rev.. read moreThat is a heavy bag to carry... you have my condolences for your loss. As always, your visit and review are deeply appreciated.
Ah, Mothers Day.. for some is it such a terrible loss..for others...not a great memory..
Resentful... such a burden to carry and yes, of course she accepted your apology..after all she is your mother.
First read of yours and I did like it.
You might like the one I wrote about mothers..Mothers Letter
Lisa, now in Spain
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
I'm glad you enjoy my work. Looking forward to reading your work as well. Thank you.
I really miss my mom....Mother's Day was tough.
I had windswept thoughts...and wished I could call her and wish her a happy day.
I can't, but reading your poem made me feel a bit closer to her...My too full bag is overflowing.
thank you for your poem.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
I understand every bit of your words... thank you for your visit, friend.