This is dedicated to Monroe Ave, and Kobe Bryant... thank you.
Which rousing tales of ours have those summer winds kept?
Nothing moved like we did... with the wind and against the heat. A rowdy crew of shorts & sneakers; putting basketball to pavement like hands to a war drum. Every neighborhood vibrated as we marched... and those boulevards became battle flags. Our voices carried them on high till nothing could be heard, but them.
Sweat soaked passion filled those white lines on hot blacktop from corner to corner. Amidst the thrill of competition, we push'd & pull'd at dreams as we challenged the sky and shook earth. We were lords of the playground; living and dying, game to game... legends and gods alike were made or slain in a moment's pause - below or above the rim.
On that sun-baked asphalt, we chased echoes of greatness - with our tongues out. We shouted "Kobe!", at the top of every game winning shot. Some of us gave so much to that speechless queen, hoping she found us fit for a crown. Will they remember... we were the favorite sons of the avenue? Or, stand in the quietude of those settled moments, when we dared to be kings?
Which rousing tales of ours have those summer winds kept?
This is my thank you to Monroe Ave, a small patch of earth that likely saved my life... and also a thank you to the late Kobe Bryant, whom was always a point of inspiration. Thank you for reading.
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Amazing storytelling in the poetry Travis. I believe, at least one time in a lifetime. We want to be kings. We do out-grow the thoughts. Maybe we don't want the responsibility? Outstanding poetry my friend. I did enjoy.
Coyote
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you dear friend... both for the visit and endearing review. I indeed wanted to be King... it w.. read moreThank you dear friend... both for the visit and endearing review. I indeed wanted to be King... it was a mighty hill to climb. I did the best I could. Lol I just hope it was enough to be remembered.
'On that sun-baked asphalt, we chased echoes of greatness - with our tongues out. We shouted "Kobe!", at the top of every game winning shot. Some of us gave so much to that speechless queen, hoping she found us fit for a crown. Will they remember... we were the favorite sons of the avenue? Or, stand in the quietude of those settled moments, when we dared to be kings?'
Am trying to write something about 'winning with glory' - advised to read your words. Yes, how right it is for me to share your emotions, that glorious experience and.. no doubt, a unique, long-lasting memory. What's more - a lesson for Life!
Posted 2 Months Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Firstly, I am thankful and humbled by your words and visit. I am honored that this piece was recomme.. read moreFirstly, I am thankful and humbled by your words and visit. I am honored that this piece was recommended to you. I hope it was a help to you. Please be sure to direct me to the piece you are working on when it's completed, if it isn't already.
1 Month Ago
Your words have a very special and victorious pride that far exedes my idea. So, for now have put m.. read moreYour words have a very special and victorious pride that far exedes my idea. So, for now have put my thoughts aside on slow simmer. If, when I dare, yes - will let you know, thank you!
Praiseworthy, honorable and impeccable. The litany of your words would make Kobe so proud. Such an impressive piece you've written, Travis. The title is everything! You must be so proud...and rightfully so!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you, thoughts such as yours are what bring forth pride. It's greatly appreciated and always an.. read moreThank you, thoughts such as yours are what bring forth pride. It's greatly appreciated and always an honor.
Wow! This is great. I would love to see you add to it, possibly turn it into a novel or novella. The title draws the reader in immediately. You are a gifted writer I can see.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you... will have to give that some consideration. Thank you for the encouraging and thought pr.. read moreThank you... will have to give that some consideration. Thank you for the encouraging and thought provoking words!
So so so wonderful! I felt the passion, the power... the nostalgia and feelings of wistfulness. We are all kings and queens somewhere, and there You and your friends are in your own field, The Masters, The Knights and Kings. a touching first and ending lines my friend. I am sure the Summer winds will continue to carry your tales. I searched for Kobe Bryant, died too young. sorry for your loss my friend.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you, very much for your uplifting, and kind thoughts. Kobe was most definitely a loss for us a.. read moreThank you, very much for your uplifting, and kind thoughts. Kobe was most definitely a loss for us all.
Good morning,
Being inspired to write is always a wonderful thing.
I am not sure I would classify this wonderful write of yours as a poem...but what do I know?
Felt like a short story...or perhaps a page from a journal.
Non the less...I like it very much,
Lisa, early here in Spain
Posted 2 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you for your honest thoughts. Poetry comes in so many different forms, what does any of us kno.. read moreThank you for your honest thoughts. Poetry comes in so many different forms, what does any of us know, right? Lol either way you read it, I'm glad it was well received.
2 Years Ago
You are most welcome…
And so right there are so many forms of poetry…
Lisa