Give Me...

My 2nd ever written piece.

Give me... a brick,

and i will create a castle.

Give me... respect,

and i will display no hassle.

Give me... a helping hand,

and i will make it through negativity.

Give me... a smile,

and i will think of positivity.

Give me... bells,

and i will ring.

Give me... harmony,

and i will sing.

Give me... doubt,

and i will fail.

Give me... pain,

and i will yell.

Give me... faith,

and i will pray.

Give me... love,

and i will forever stay.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Laura Harrison]

This is such a beautiful write :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, I appreciate your wonderful thoughts.

[Sami Khalil]

I give you a great applause for this wonderful write...:)............

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, dear friend. It couldn't be more appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).............

[Jack...]

This was wonderful my friend. Nicely penned.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Jack... your thoughts are greatly appreciated.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words I have found are ever inspiring.With encouragement we thrive and with adversity we will claw our way up and reach for the sky and never admit defeat.Well that is what I think anyway.You have gained a fan in me:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, I'm elated this piece had such an affect. It was so very early in my writing history, sometimes, i barely recognize it as my own.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and you should recognize it because it is awesome:)

[Rose Diamond]

I absolutely loved this! The words flow beautifully, the message is lovely and inspiring, and the word choice is perfect! Good job! :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Rosie... your visit and review are greatly appreciated.

[Nicole Williams]

I love this, great concept and everything flows beautifully together.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so very much, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate you reviewing it, and i will be sure to check out your work as well.

[Nicole Williams]

thank you :) I'd appreciate that

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love this this is brilliant! Well everything goes with everything... i love the whole meaning to it :)
amazing write :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, I'm elated you were able to enjoy it to such lengths. Your review truly has humbled my pen hand.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha your welcome :)

[Caradoc]

I really liked this one.

It's a good message strongly backed up by good word choice; you get out what you put in. This is as applicable to interpersonal relationships with people as well as life in general. The first line was probably my favorite, the idea of building a castle with just the nudge of being handed one brick.

Nicely done.

-Caradoc

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, you've given true life to what I have always considered my crudest work. Your words have refined my thinking of this and I appreciate it greatly.

[Caradoc]

You are most welcome.

It is a good poem, a good start as far as second poems go. You did well with this.

[SyberRose]

Lovely piece Travis...as always...nicely done...Enjoyed reading...Rose:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Rose... I was 13 or 14 when I wrote this. I appreciate your review as always and can't wait to catch up on your recent works.

[SyberRose]

Thanks...ive been taking a break so I have to catch up on my writing too haa..

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I understand, please do send me a read request should I miss your initial return.