Self Portrait

A Poem by Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

For WC... my first piece composed entirely on WC.

Dark, coiled locks cascade down

passing broad shoulders;

framing a chocolate brown face

with high cheek bones,

and a slender button nose.

Full lips that love to kiss

dreams and high hopes.

The strongest feature

are those eyes,

strangely, they hold within them

strength and weariness.

They've seen too much, but

still they refuse to shut.

They paint such a tragically,

beautiful portrait...

that I am glad to call my own.

© 2013 Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. A special thanks to Angi for extending this exercise to me.

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Joyce S. Greene

You have painted a self-portrait that suggests your inner self by the things you say about your physical characteristics. That is not easily done and you did it very well. Your inner strength in the face of pain and tragedy shines through along with your readiness to love. Excellent poetry!

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11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for those words. You have captured the essence of this piece firmly!

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I enjoy reading your very fine poetry

11 Years Ago

It is very mutual, Joyce.

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Renée

what can I say..but Extremely Well Done !! and leave a ( :

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11 Years Ago

Thank you, Renee it means a lot to me!

11 Years Ago

I admire that you are able to write such a telling piece about yourself... not just external, but I .. read more

11 Years Ago

I appreciate that beyond words. You have humbled my pen hand! Thank you.

Sami Khalil

You have described yourself with precise appreciation and confidence. Good luck in the contest...:)

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11 Years Ago

Thanks dear friend... its more of a writing exercise for me, I dare not attempt to contend with the .. read more

11 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)

Pryde Foltz

Sensual, endearing, and strong, PH.

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11 Years Ago

Thank you, your words are appreciated and humbling.

Lydia Shutter

Wonderful introspection. Although you do not have your full face in your profile photo, I can picture it now. Splendid imagery. I liked this a lot. Lydi*

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11 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydia you reviews are always humbling. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Deepak Janardhan

Prompt, simple, and gently pleasant. Keep up the good work.

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11 Years Ago

Thank you, I will try my best to. I appreciate you reading/reviewing my work, I will be sure to reci.. read more

Dye

What a great self portrait. I feel as though I can not only see you but I have a glimpse into who you are. For your eyes that have seen to much but refuse to shut, to always have to keep your eyes open and your lips that love to kiss-- so sweet at the same time.

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11 Years Ago

Thank you, Dye your words are sincere and I appreciate that greatly.

Frieda P

Oooh those eyes, knew you'd have pensive eyes Travis...love this glimpse into your soul, excellent!

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11 Years Ago

You're a bad bad boy Travis ;-)

11 Years Ago

My chest says, Hero... my back says, Villain. Just a lil hint. haha

11 Years Ago

So women should catch your flip side first and beware eh? hahah

SyberRose

Nice to read your portrait Travis...they are fun to write...this was great...nicely penned as always...Enjoyed reading...Rose:)

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11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading it, Rose.

Stella Armour

you bring out my artistic streak ph... your portrait would have such beautiful features and your eyes would be far away and sad.What a lovely image i have of you..