Beauty, Rest

while i watched her sleep

The world around her gives no breaks

And time gives no slack

Always at the center of eager eyes

And pursued by the greedy hands of men....

Their want knows no bounds

Day in and night out, beauty obliges as much she can

But she can never give enough

So the chase for beauty is ceaseless

I can see the blisters on her feet

The weariness of her existence is pouring through her eyes

And still... they come for her

Like a sea of crows

They gather around her

Necks fixed forward, eyes glazed with lust

Each squawking for a turn

Overwhelmed... beauty succumbs

Now, I can barely see her

The world around her is eating her up

And it intends on leaving nothing to spare

I almost let things run it's course

Until I thought of a tomorrow --- without beauty

What then does the sun become

What is the use of a song, or it's melody

The laughter of children... what reason is left to smile

Even worse, what becomes of an already scary world

If even beauty has no place

I race to be at her aid

I dive into the masses and search for beauty

I pull her from the hold of the insatiable

And without hesitation... I run

They give chase... so I run harder

Finally, beauty and I are alone

I assure her these hands want nothing, but for her to rest easy

She settles in my arms, looks at me and asks

What is it I really wish of her

I place my finger over her lips

And I say only what needs to be said...

Rest

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

that's quite the hero sir! ;) your "Beauty" can be so many different things ...most of the while i was thinking of those in the modeling business and all the demands placed on them to be this or that ..to move and stop so perfectly ..no wonder many loose themselves ..but it could be a more personal story as well .. a woman saved from herself and the destructive behaviors of the porn business ... or just a woman ...looking for love while all the time her love is pursuing her and all she need do is turn around ;) very inspiring write for me..unlocked all kinds of images and emotions ...
E.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, E. I'm glad you found this piece so affecting. While this was written for a beautiful woman close to me, I do see how it could be applied to the other scenarios that you described above. Thank you for an outstanding review.

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned..I really enjoyed your words...Rose

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Rose, thank you... i'm humbled a writer of your ability enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a storyteller. I like the flow of the story in the poem. Giving life to the poor girl. I like the description of the men desiring her attention. I could feel her dying for lack of real concern. I did like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Coyote, thank you for such a positive review. I'm pleased you enjoyed it, while being able to feel it's intent.

[quinfinn]

beautiful, and i will go as far as to say "drop dead gorgeous" poetry. this examines, thoroughly , a theme i am very repetitive with, but you have done it great justice with your style and words. well done!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you for that humbling review, i appreciate it more than i can show. I look forward to reading your material on the subject. i have another piece with similar theme, just different direction. it's actually my longest piece to date, i'll be sure to send you a read request when i post it, would like to know what you think of it. Thanks again!

[quinfinn]

no problem, i will be happy to read and review...and do feel free to examine some of my deeper pages...you will find more beauty than witless garbage there.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I planned on reading more, looking forward to the experience.

[Sami Khalil]

"beauty has no place

I race to be at her aid

I dive into the masses and search for beauty

I pull her from the hold of the insatiable

And without hesitation... I run

They give chase... so I run harder

Finally, beauty and I are alone"
A very nice poem that I enjoyed reading it so much ...Pen on ...:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thanks, Sami... i'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did ...You are welcome...:)

[Rogue]

Oh, this one really touched a deep chord in me. For reasons too long to explain.
This is just a lovely piece. :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, Rogue. I'm glad you were able to relate to it so intimately, once again you've humbled my pen hand. Thank you for the review.

[Zelle]

Finally, beauty and I are alone
I assure her these hands want nothing, but for her to rest easy
She settles in my arms, looks at me and asks
What is it I really wish of her
I place my finger over her lips
And I say only what needs to be said...
Rest
a spectacular read! and yes its amazing to know that u have someone by your side to take care of you as u sleep... thank u for sharing! :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Zelle, thank you... i truly appreciate the feedback, i'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

[Zelle]

yes i did! :)