Let me love you

Let me love you

A Poem by HB Rita

My angel,
At first, let me kiss on your hand
To show my admiration, respect and adoration to you
For being kind to me
Let me kiss on your forehead to show my Sincerity to you
For giving me comforting affection
Let me kiss on your ears to show my respect to you
For building the bridge of intimacy with me
Let me send you an air kiss to show my gratitude to you
For being my best buddy
Let me kiss on your cheek with thankfulness
For having a great time together
Let me hug you tight with vivacity to love you forever
For all you have done for me
Let me live with you forever
For your attentiveness of equivalence relationship.

© 2019 HB Rita


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Illustrious and appreciable lines. Divine love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Your emotions ring out honest and full of grace. A willing heart will always find love.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

5 Years Ago

A willing heart will always find love. ........so true
You are certainly very appreciative of your angel. Your lines are full of warmth. It appears your angel is a very lucky one Nicely expressed.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

5 Years Ago

Thank you love
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
a relationship that works is one that has balance and equal respect...
wonderful in theme...and full of truth.

i like how you started each line with alternate "let" and "for"
works well.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

5 Years Ago

I actually have no one to dedicate this poem. just wrote it. Thanks
I get the impression this person has your approval.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

5 Years Ago

ha ha! Not really

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HB Rita
HB Rita

Flushing , NY



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HB Rita, ancestors Bangladesh, live in NYC, achieved higher education at Touro College and University in New York. I am involved in New York City public school teaching for 14 years. I am also a well.. more..

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