My Confession Today

My Confession Today

A Poem by HB Rita

Oh My love-
I walked on the same road you walked on
I realized,
My feeling was right
Though, my action wasn’t right!
I started to think
Why all of a sudden my view towards life has changed!
Found nothing but digging the obsession towards you!
My love,
You became a true worship of my living!
Still, nothing can exchange of how rude i was with you!
I felt, from my vein to vein the temptation of love
Was i wrong to be next to you?
Was i mean to be seeking for you?
My love, i am distorted
Broken in to several pieces!
Just to let you know my love
You’r the last thing on my mind tonight
There will be no flashback after today
The day has come to move
I am confessing to you all that i have done wrong
I am leaving forever
Leaving behind all insanity to you to remember me some day!
My love, it hurts
It hurts to leave; hurts to condemn your love!
I find no other way to recover but break down and cry.
But tonight, i am free
Free from pain
Free from tear filled eyes!

© 2019 HB Rita


Author's Note

HB Rita
It's a realization of an absence mind doing something wrong to someone that can never be fixed. We often do mistakes without thinking of others. We hurt other's feeling not knowing that It will hurt us back or It might cause us a great lose.

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The speaker seems to have the insight to recognize obsession. The correct action is being taken; obsessions lead only to pain.

Posted 5 Years Ago


So true,
I many times have made it through the course of self awareness....denial, guilt, reflection, realization, understanding,, sorrow, regret....but to change? Even knowing how much happier we could be...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

5 Years Ago

It happens. We all do mistakes and we do realize. We just have to understand that we do realize.
HB Rita

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your review

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HB Rita
HB Rita

Flushing , NY



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HB Rita, ancestors Bangladesh, live in NYC, achieved higher education at Touro College and University in New York. I am involved in New York City public school teaching for 14 years. I am also a well.. more..

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