crybaby

crybaby

A Poem by Zombified Spider
"

just a crybaby

"
I'm a tough b***h
But I'm sensitive
Coulda, coulda, coulda
Sucker punch be a sedative 
It's relative 
Because you've been pushing me over the f*****g edge
I'm about to rip your eyes out
I'm madder than I've ever been
I just want to punch you
But I know 
I can't

F*****g, f*****g, f*****g
F**k boy
F*****g up my day
Remove your hand from my body
Or I'll remove it from yours

B***h
Are you trying to make me cry
Are you trying to make me lose it
You're acting f*****g stupid
This could get gruesome
B***h
Are you trying to make me cry
Are you trying to make me lose it
You're acting f*****g stupid
This could get gruesome

I really want to beat you into the ground
Funny how this could go down
Do you want to die
I really want to beat you into the ground
Funny how this could go down
Do you want to die

Ooh

B***h
Are you trying to make me cry
Are you trying to make me lose it
You're acting f*****g stupid
This could get gruesome
B***h
Are you trying to make me cry
Are you trying to make me lose it
You're acting f*****g stupid
This could get gruesome

Careful with me
I'm volatile
Careful with me
I'm homicidal
Careful with me
I'm suicidal
Careful with me
I'm feeling violent
Careful with me
I'm in denial

© 2024 Zombified Spider


Author's Note

Zombified Spider
this was written partially with a certain Title IX lawsuit in mind.

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As tumi mentioned, this reads a bit like a rap; and certainly got a structure to it. It's not just random ranting, and the writer's anger shows through. It mentions that the writer is both tough and sensitive, and she's clearly not someone who gives way to anyone who causes unwanted grief; in her life. Indeed, modern life can sometimes be an existential source of "horror"; at times? Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sounds like a rap, strong words as well


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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