Take from me

Take from me

A Poem by Zombified Spider
"

seriously stop. taking. My. APPLES! this is my attempt at making a joke

"
Every time I try to fly
I try to succeed
I fall
I crash through the floor
into the depths of my failure
you always point it out
my flaws
every time I try
I hear your voice in my head
saying that "you are not enough"

you take from me
you take my time
my will to live
my life
my love
you hold me back 
I've come to accept
that I will never succeed
that all you will do
is take from me
take from me

maybe you're afraid
that I will outshine you
that I will take the praise
the flowers
steal the show
I scream 
you never hear
there is a reason why I am so loud
that reason is you
your followers
people you've wrapped around your fingers

you take from me
you take my time
my will to live
my life
my love
you hold me back 
I've come to accept
that I will never succeed
that all you will do
is take from me
take from me

Yes I like evil
I understand their feelings
no-one is evil without a reason
they were created
from innocence 
There's a reason why I scream
HAIL TYRANNY
it's 'cause you created me

it's 'cause you take from me

© 2024 Zombified Spider


Author's Note

Zombified Spider
I hope you've never felt this way <3

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Daz
Unfortunately I've felt this before. Sometimes in this life we come across such people. Or maybe they find a way into our lives. Best to get out of that situation once the signs show themselves. This is powerful and meaningful writing. Very relatable. I'm in awe of your ability to express your message.

Posted 2 Months Ago


I love this :3 it makes me happy when I can relate to poems :3 it makes me feel less alone :3

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zombified Spider

7 Months Ago

thank you, I feel like i'm no longer alone too

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Added on April 9, 2024
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Tags: take from me, evil, lyrics, poem, sad, angry

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