HIGH (She's My High)

Is it a girl ,a drug or both? You decide.

 

 

I was told not to f**k with you.

Put no trust in you.

Don’t even look at you.

But your tempting.

 

Seduction from you is

Like prey being stalked.

But you don’t need me

You do it for the sport.

 

Sized me up when I got here.

“I know I can get him.”

Your lips form a whisper

 

But it’s those curves that are so damn loud

they make me stare.

It’s a party environment

but I don’t see the crowd.

 

I don’t think you’ll come over here

but you do.

And when you get over here

 you introduce

your self

 

as the street prescribed narcotic.

 

Your something I need.

You say

“I’ll make you feel good “

you say.

You just want to get into my head

and stay.

 

To see the thoughts behind my eyes

Just like…

I want to get between those thighs..

 

My downfall.

 

Your

Disguised as smoke

and

I inhale you

Deeply.

To big a puff

I inhale the rush

and my virgin lungs can’t take in all of you.

 

(cough)

 

You laugh at my inexperience

and coax me

to do more of you.

..while still coughing…

I say “Sure.”

 

You use parts of me

for things I hadn’t thought of.

For things not intended.

I comply only because

I’m extended.

 

…and high.

 

from your affection/attention

you paid to me.

Should I feel used?

Should I feel like a fool?

Maybe.

I’m still too stunned to notice.

And the euphoria is so ‘oh my god’ like.

 

You just want to use me

to make yourself feel good?

Okay.

“Do what with my tongue?”

 

I comply.

 

Your lips are made for kissing

and tasting your wisdom.

But don’t speak to me.

Communicate with your body

poetically.

 

…hmmmm….

Your delivery is enticing

and sinful.

 

Delightfully erotic.

 

Once the pleasure is over

 and

your done playing with your kill.

 

….I taste

the inside of your mouth.

 

I’m nodding off.

 

If some one doesn’t wake me up

from this blissful dream

I’m going to die

with the smell of you in my nose

and the taste of you on my lips.

 

How divine I feel right now

with you….

next to…

me.

 

 

 

Author's Note

It's just a phase I'm going thru. A gurl like a drug or a drug like a lover.
I'm really not to pleased with this because of differnt reasons. What do you think?

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

You may not be pleased with it my friend, but it is very pleasing from this poets appetites, point of reading. I loved it. so casually drawn out. It speaks of that irrisistible factor that some relationships have....I love the way the real male in you speaks, however silently and her preditorial nature is a real turn on too. Being of such a nature helps make Tai biase and extremely interesting!lol Great work, a little bit of an edit and it will be purrrrrrrrrrrfic. PS I like this phase!

[neeneediva]

Very great read i really hung on to every word.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

another excellent write, i love it

[Tenten]

if i go from writers perspective the flow is choppy and some misspelling but screw it because its an amazing piece even if you're not happy with it, raw intensity and twist perspective, this just goes and lingers inside for a while. beautiful, i adore this. a truly captivating piece.

[M_S_Lay]

I liked it alot. It brought to mind those early days of romance and I think you pegged it perfectly.

[Caitbabie008]

AWWWWWWWWW really great and wonderful write! You are awsome. Keep up the writing.

[Theta S. T.]

Wow nice phase! Eventhough I don't think this is a phase I think it a life long adventure for you. But hey I all I know about is a bus stop and...yea I'm going to stop lol...This is truely a great write even if your not happy with it I was very pleased with it all and I love the descriptions that you use the way you describe the girl(or drug) is tantalizing and very seductive. Once a gain great write love

~~Theta