God Gurl

I like her more that what she knows.

God gurl….

Don’t make me eat you.

I got teeth like Vampires.

 I’m so hungry.

..and she wears blood red lingerie.

 

(I’m hurtin)

 

I know were friends and I know we talk

Share each others secrets and

Before I forget to say

what I have to say….

 

You’re like the biggest prize to me.

That’s what my friends say

But I said it’s not like that.

 

She’s just a friend

That just means….

I wasn’t hungry yet.

 

(god!)

You smell so good

I mean…

How was your day?

Hehehe.

I laughed it off.

Right?

 

God! I can’t let her know what I really think.

It’s not

cool or

proper.

 

But she keeps

flaunting it.

Displaying it.

All around the place

What do I mean?

It’s that beauty.

That very pretty face

and piece of…..

I’m sorry…

 

I can’t stop loving it.

It’s a secret sin because

I’m too ugly

to be loved

to show my  love openly.

….and…

 

I didn’t rank in the most handsome.

So I’m the most ugly.

That means

no hope of a good night snack.

(god I’m so hungry)

Now I’m hungry.

I won’t stop myself.

 

So I caress myself

and hope for

invisible stains

on

stainless sheets..

WHOOPS!!!

 

Too much info….

Still I got the thirst.

(god I want to burst)

But she thinks we’re just friends.

Okay?

Does her sister like flirts?

 

Reviews

[John Stussy]

that was.. ummm, interesting? lol a little tmi on the stains, but it added a light humor to the piece. and you shouldn't be so negative, look at me. i'm awkward, practically a skeleton, not the least bit muscular... not what one would consider good looking by any standards, unless you are a necrophiliac. yet i have a very beautiful woman, who for some strange reason says i'm sexy. it's because she likes me for who i am. and i know you're a great dude, and a hell of a poet. just take a chance man, see what happens. just make sure it's a well-timed chance lol. if someone as awkward as me can get a hot one, i am more than confident you can get one yourself.

[TL Boehm]

Digging around on your page - this is a gem. That facade we have when we really want to....but we are trying to be....
Yes - this one is a keeper.
Miss you.

[Caitbabie008]

O and great write!

[Caitbabie008]

Keep the friendship as long you can and becareful. Dont hurt her.

[Tenten]

my prid-chan would like to say while it inspires other thoughts for her she approves of you and is a f*****g awesome flow.

[Tai Chi Italy]

This is really funny Ham, because it shows the inner workings of a man's mind when it comes to being friends with gurls!lol you can't do it. Sex is always on your minds!lol Great work. I love the line, 'Does her sister like flirts?' it reminds me of what my husband used to say when getting chatted up at Uni, he was a mature student, he used to say, Is your mum single and would you like another sister?'lol tongue in cheek of course, because he would never stray far from Tai....I wonder who this little ditty referrs to? Or need I? Smiling at you, back in the saddle, Tai

[Ruby Moon]

your pieces are all so unique that most of the time i dont know what to say
i can only look at them and try to process them in my mind...
but somehow they always flow and comes out smoothly
^-^
its always an interesting feeling to read one of your pieces
i like this one (just wanted to say that)

[Theta S. T.]

LMAO!!!
Very nice love.
I'm going to be clueless for a min and ask about the stains????
Yea I got jokes!!!
And a lot of them!!
Lol...I really like this one too
As I've said many times before you are a great writer
In most of your pieces you bring this comic relief that sometimes is unexpected
And always flows from beginning to end
And always very interesting
Thanks for making my day sooooo much better
And yes I do have jokes
But I'll wait..lol

~~Theta