Coco Hyanie (before Kosnor)

It was for a contest. Pick a person at random and write a poem about them.

Coco Hyanie

 

So easy to pull

From her name.

It could mean

The rich chocolate

In my cup.

It still adds to her fame.

 

New to her work

I took time and did read.

Let it stand

for ten grand

Because that’s what I need.

 

Not just whispering sweet nothings

Because nothings this sweet.

I Never do idle chit chat

but I’ll dwell and hear that

Over 

And over again.

 

In the hierarchy of ranking

what really does matter

are words 

that are heard

over electronic chatter.

…and

Because

she’s not high

in her ranking

isn’t something of disgust.

 

Some of the best music

I’ve heard

came from the back of the bus.

 

Author's Note

Again it was for a contest.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

An adorable write about the screen name. I liked it. Yes, the "back of the bus" is where it pays to pay attention. Lydia

[Tenten]

the flow goes so strong that is seems song like, very good for a random name to create a piece. it keeps moving.

[Brette Medb]

I could hear this more as a song... it was interesting and it had great imagery.. great work.


B.

[Robert Luna]

This had a very musical quality to it. I could almost hear music playing softly in the background as I read this. I liked the way it flowed and carried vivid images like a scene form a familiar movie that i forgot that I had enjoyed at one time. Very interesting change of style for you and you did it great.


Wonderfully Done!!!!