True Story

True Story

A Poem by Yina

The first time I met her,

I smiled an asked,

"Do I get a hug?"

She said, "Well, ya"

In the middle of the hug

she gasped, "You're choking me!"

I pulled back an laughed,

"I'm sorry"

 

Then later she introduced me to my crush

Saying, "Helen, this is Adam.

Adam, this is Helen.

Ok now you can like hug or shake hands

or whatever it is you guys do."

Then pulled our hands together,

So of course we shook hands!

 

As I went through the difficulty of

my family's troubles,

she was always there to listen

an give advice

She was always ready for a hug

Anytime I needed one

 

Now We've fought once to often

"You need to find a new best friend"

A stab in the heart that will never fully heal

I should have been there for her

Best Friends Forever we said

What happened? Where was I?

What will I do without her there with me?

 

Somehow, someday, I might survive

but I just have one last thing to say,

"Annie, I'll love you forever" 

© 2011 Yina


Author's Note

Yina
The poem tells it all

Thanks for reading:)

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You captured the essence of the relationship in just a few snippets. And then expressed well the loss at the end. Part of good poetry is the simplicity, capturing the essence. And you have done it well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yina

11 Years Ago

That's a lot for the meaningful review:)
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your poems have such an innocence about them, maybe you don't realize how much your saying, they remind me of classics, boo radley comes to mind, the wizard of oz, these sweet stories that have a lot of meaning and occasionally darkness and social satire..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yina

11 Years Ago

I hadn't realized that.. thanks that means a lot:) I'm glad you liked it:) If you're interested, my .. read more
Yina

11 Years Ago

It's actually 'The Most Amazing Moment' my bad:P
Awww this this was so sweet but so sad! I've had that falling out with a friend that I considered a sister. Nice piece, written like a memory. Very nicely done!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


awww... that's so sweet that I'm crying. Now and then I look back to when a person I once called a best fried couldn't even be called a friend now. It's hard and it hurts...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yina

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the review:) It was really hard at the time but honestly, we're friends again:)
aww helen

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job!!!It was so beautiful and meaningful. . I loved it!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really touching, and broke my heart. I'm so sorry. It was beautiful though. I loved the beginning. So cute! I pray that true best friends will come into your life, and help you out in these tough times for you. Don't ever give up hope. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


hmmm, Im so sorry. Its always hard to lose a 'best friend'. I guess even more so when or if its because of your doing. Sometimes we need to evaluate ourselves in order to determine the problem and then attempt to deal with it. Thank God for forgiveness so then if your really sorry, then maybe your friend may forgive you:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Speechless. That's what I'm left with is nothing to say because it was so good.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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