The Feeling

          The sweat running down your back

          The heavy breathing

          The nervousness clenching your guts

          The coach yelling

          The crowd cheering

 

          All the amazing feelings and sounds of....

               

                    BASEBALL!!

Author's Note

I really need a better title! Ideas?? Please?

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Nice one, can feel the excitment. Great work! I'm not really good with titles though :) The feeling sounds good enough to me

[frozensakura]

great job expressing feeling.

[Dreamer]

I like this one! This is alot more poetic and i feel myself getting into this:) Its almost like im on the field. good write:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

The first thing that came to mind was "Take me out to the ballgame" or "The Rush" or "There it goes again"

You described your feelings well in this.