Baseball!!:):)

Something I wrote while I was terribly bored:/

Let's go, Team B

Let's go, woot woot!  :)

 

 

 

Team B Players 2011:

Girls:

Angelina

Helen

Linda

Lisa

Christina

 

Boys:               Coach:

Abe F               Abe Froese

Abe W

Isaac

Danny

Corny

Johnny

Tommy

Aaron

Yosh

Author's Note

Ya........ weird but whatever..... :)

Reviews

[Karli]

Yeahh, I LOVE Baseball.

[Dreamer]

Hmmmm i have to be honest its not my favourite piece. Uhmmm I sounds more like a chant (maybe thats exactly what you were going for) Its really sweet though:) If i could suggest something, I'd say to extend the beginning. Talk about the match by appealing to the 5 senses, that way it adds substance and a more poetic feel k!:) keep writing i look forward to reading more:)