Tough Times

Life is tough isn't it?

 

Mine sure is!

There's so many times when,

I just wanna go

Go til I'm in the middle of nowhere

where there is noone but me.

Just get away from all the fighting.

Fighting between me an mom,

me an my sister,

mom an dad.

Everyone!

That seems to be the only thing happening these days!

Wow I wanna cry

Just let it all out!

But then I would have to explain it

an how do you explain something like

why you're crying about a life like that?

Especially to the main person you're crying about.

I'm so young but

is it wrong for me to wish I could just

fall in love, get married an get out of this place?

Well that's how I feel.

 

Life is tough, isn't it?

Author's Note

That pretty much sums up my life. Just had to get it out for once! I've needed this for a very VERY loooong time!! Now I'm about to cry........

Note: If you have something critical to say about me writing this, Send it in a message so I can feel free to give you a piece of my mind! I'm not gonna put up with that. Not for this write. Wanna criticize? Go to my other writings!

Thanks for any reviews tho

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I love the fact that you are not affraid to say what you feel in this piece, now you just need the courage and strength, and you will find it in you, to confront the one whom you cry about! No crtisising here! You will find it, I know cause Ive read some of your other works and it is in those words that you hold your strength! Let it out and you wont have to cry anymore! Pray about it, and give it to God!

[.......]

Powerful and emotional, straight from yoru heart.
Your emotions are so well expressed, sorry about the
sadness you experience. I would never bash anyone's
feelings.

[AndyJCash]

It's a nice explosion of emotions, mainly sadness and confusion. Things will get better though, gotta believe that.

[Becky C Strukamp]

This writing is beautiful. No critism. You write from your heart and it shows. Thank you for sharing this poem.

[DontBlink158]

Ummm.. i wasnt going to bash your poem.. but i love the emotions you put behind it and defending it.. So great job, i feel like this sometimes to. When you need to let it out, but cant. Its really hard, and your poem summed it up nicely. Great job!!!!

[November Gold]

We should never apologize for our realness in our writing, or our living. This was ravaged with pain throughout, a child torn between the angry world she perceives is her existence and the allure of what might be better outside the door. I have been right where you are and I will say this- falling in love and getting married does NOT make it all better or make it all go away, it just adds one more level of chaos and disorder to the pile. Someone said below, you can use all of this to become stronger, and I hope that you will do just that because you're expression, your honesty in your writing all of it, is great and I would love to see you continue to write, use it as your personal therapy and let it help you heal and keep moving forward with a genuine heart, because the alternative is bitterness and that is a nasty pill to swallow. Dont let it make you bitter, sweetie, let it build you up and make you stronger.

[Krystal Nicole]

Great poem!!! I loved how you got it all out. Very passiionate and somewhat angry but that's good. I believe sometimes its okay to be angry with life. :)(:

[dreaming dame]

Get it out. But don't forget that by surviving this, you'll either become stronger, or bitter. Your choice. :)

[stars are far]

i loved this alot
and i agree with you in every single word

[Kelly M.]

Aw, I'm sorry, Fairy! :( Life is tough, I agree, but there's always a light at the end of a tunnel. :) God sees every tear of yours that falls, and He knows that you're heart is in pain. I hope everything works out for you and your family. :) You'll be in my prayers.