That Wonderful Place

For a contest to descibe where I'd like to go

A place where I'll never cry again

a place of no more pain or gain

a place of no more death

a place of no more heart breaks

a place of no more arguments

a place of no more fights

a place of no more rights

a place of no more wars

a place of only peace

 

In this wonderful place we'll have only joy

there we'll have only happiness

only peaceful smiles

no frowns or tears

there will be never-ending singing

never-ending laughter

never-ending hugs

 

Oh to call this glorious place home

this wonderful place where Jesus resides

 

I wanna go to Heaven

Author's Note

I took out the gas prices line since there's several poeple that told me it's a mockery to Heaven

Reviews

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wonderful write

[realmwriter]

So do I!

[dreaming dame]

:) you stole my idea! :) But you stole it well. :)

[clairvoyantmars]

beautiful... :))

[Honourfish]

awesome poem! loved it a great description of your heaven and i have to completely agree it sounds lovely!

[Coffee Vampier]

Can I catch the next train ? It sounds like such a glorious place :) nicely written The flow is very smooth and the words get people thinking.... no gas precises? I'm soo in!