The Most Amazing Moment

My very first hug from the guy I've totally fallen for:):)

All day Easter Sunday I watched you

I thought about you constantly

All my thoughts were filled with you

an how I wanted so bad to

just go talk to you already

but of course I was just my usual shy self

not saying more then

4 or 6 words to you at once

Why couldn't I just get over it and

talk to you like any other person?

Probably because you're more then just

'any other person' to me

 

Then that wonderful evening

you watched me as the other guy hugged me

I know you don't think I saw it

but I really did

then you watched as I hugged all the girls

Now you were ready for one of your own

I noticed in the corner of my eye as you got up

my heart started pounding

then over my shoulder someone said something to me

I turned to answer first

giving me a chance to relax a bit

I can't even remember what she asked

or even what I answered

all I know is the amazing guy standing next to me

waiting for that first hug

Then I turned back to you

an everyone else in the room vanished

 

You folded your long arms around me

in the most amazing way

my heart completely melted

I held on to you for that one hug

an wished I could just stay there an

never have to leave

then you and I both let go

I looked up at you an said,

wow you're tall

 

For about 2 days after

my cheek is still tingling were your warm cheek touched mine

my heart still pounds thinking about it

Author's Note

Don't mind the grammer or the way it's written. It wasn't meant to rhyme or anything. Just puttin my feelings out there:) Tell me what you think though. I'll edit it if I remember more of this special moment:)

Dedicating this writing to Frank Wiebe... He's gone!!!!:'( He died in a car accident early this morning (February 5, 2012 about 12:20-12:30) :'''(

Reviews

[Poe Redd]

:'D I give you a standing ovation! (But only in my head, because I'm at the library,lol.) It was so cool to read this, because, well, I was there. But I just got to see it all, feel it all, as if I were YOU! A completely different feeling, let me tell you. Now I know how it feels to really like that guy, haha. It was so powerfull, truly. You really grabbed those feelings and glued them raw into this write. I love you, darling!

[Daydreamer54]

AW I love the emotion in this poem. it's so sweet amnd i know how it feels to be hugged by a guy you like! it's so sweet! Great wrote!

[Star Wolf]

Sound like one of those wonderfully magical moments. Reading your words was like watching this scene happen in a movie or on the TV. A really awesome poem. You did an amazing job on this.

[Jessi Berlasty]

You portrayed the feeling of a crush perfectly. ^.^ Reading it reminded me of the giddiness of it all. Amazing job, and I figure you'll go back and add the proper punctuation and such later, so I find no need to point that out. Good job!

[Honourfish]

absolutely beautiful! brought a tear to my eye reading this, I can completely relate to this and the nerves and the hope and desire and everything. Superb bit of writing.

[.......]

oh my this is so heart tugging and wonderful.
So very nicely written. I really enjoyed this.
Who says poetry always has to rhyme.
This is amazing!

[dreaming dame]

So.SWEEEEEET!!!!! not even made of grilled cheese!! hmph,lol
:) :):):):):):) looooove it!!

[Queen of Fantasy]

Simple, Sweet, Just Gorgeous!

[Aurora Lynn]

First I would like to say thank you for your review. Now for the poem itself. This was a simple and sweet poem, perfect for the subject that you wrote about. Sometimes you just need to scream (or write, in this case) your feelings to the world.
~Aurora

[Awkward]

Awww this is so cute :)