Something

Something

A Poem by Yina
"

Something is after me.... what could it be??

"

I tried to pick up my speed as I heard it coming,

coming, faster an faster!!

 What will I do if it gets me?

Whatever it is

 I don't even know what it is!

 It's following me everywhere!

It's driving me almost mad.

I turn to look

maybe this time I'll get at least a glimce of it

Yet as I'm looking back

 There's nothing there

How do I get away from something I can't even see?

While turning to look

I stumble over some seaweed

"What's seaweed doing here??"

Tripping to stay on my feet

Not ready to give in to whatever is after me

I scream over my shoudler,

 "Just leave me alone already!!"

Suddenly I trip over the totally-out-of-place seaweed

Falling flat an my face!

Maybe if I lay totally still

whatever it is will think I'm already dead

An just leave me be

I thought hopefully.

 Something just grabbed my back!!

'So this is what you feel like just before you get killed'

These were my last thoughts before...

I jerked awake from my awful nightmare

© 2011 Yina


Author's Note

Yina
Not exactly how I imagined the ending but I just wrote whatever came to mind an my mind feels kinda screwed right now so hope it's not to bad:/ Give me your honest opinion tho, good or bad. An also let me know what you imagine this creepy something to be:)

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It was me, darling. It was me, of course. And you know why. hmph. x3 Anyway.. i'm inpressed. i really like this. keep it up! ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

To be honest I really like it,I could never come up with something good as that I love it keep up the good work :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Yina
Yina

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