Lamentations Of A Fallen Angel

I wrote this poem many moons ago. It's not that good but I thought I'd share it anyway. :)

Delirium.
I am cast down.
Cannot the damning fires of hell be quenched?
The raging flames torment my winged breast,
And how the heat infects me with it's pain.
Behold the testimony to an unjust God,
Jehovah's mercy absent unto me,
For here I stand condemned of heinous crimes
And wrongly judged unclean eternally.
My Gehenna,
My fiery plateau,
My kingdom of unremitting hate,
Wage war upon the heavenly host
And those that would desire Him most.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You expressed you own disappointment with this piece, written sometime ago. I do not share those views, I enjoyed the read.

Chris

[sette]

so creatively written with the flow of words can capture one's attention.