No where to be Seen

Today I felt comfort in rays of sun.

Though you spoke with words made of ash and mold.

Your spirit still thinner then a apple's core.

Yesterday I waited for thoughts to roll in.

Though you spoke in words soaked in gold and lined with rust.

Your voice cracking each word to dust.

Last year I felt to much.

I could not stop.

Though you were no where to be seen.

Your voice still spoke too me. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the blow lines.
"Today I felt comfort in rays of sun.
Though you spoke with words made of ash and mold.
Your spirit still thinner then a apple's core."
You said a handful in the statements. Thank you Renee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SmittyJas]

Feeling comfort in the suns rays is a God Send to the dreamers

[ace]

I love the raw emotion coming off of this its heart breakingly depressing how it starts with comfort and ends with haunting

[Alucard6336]

This is beautiful.

1st verse A should be an and apples should be apple's.

Last verse to should be too

It's an amazing piece of work though, like people say about me lol.

All jokes aside this poem is better than many of the things I've seen here. You have a real talent.

[gypsynight]

Thank you so much!