Lovlie Lilies

Wanted to try something different.

Lovlie Lilies

Lazile Laying

Whispering

Whispy

Words

On the

Wind

They sing

To me

In broken Englash

Their scent

Enchanteeng

Their acscent heavy.

Reviews

[Michael X]

An absolute string of cracker jack cliches. choppy and hard on the rhythm but the intention is definitely there. so for that you get a 100.

[x]

I wish I could say something mean about this for you.....but sorry.
I feel it's clever and sweet.
Nicely delivered and most enjoyed! Thanks for sharing.

[Orlando Murcia]

This poem was like a sweet breath of air

Nicely done sweetheart, by the way thank you for your review :)

[Angel's Lady]

Very lovely! Such a spring feel to it....makes me smile!