Torn For Eternity

A trapped energy
exploding from within.
Sprinkles of light particles
through the heavens they spin.

Attaching once again
a different place so free.
A new kind of energy
begins to be.

As it rotates it forms
it can't be still.
Energy within energy
it needs to feel.

Developing a notion
from itself from within...
a need becomes a want
a want to not spin.

It exploded, it became...
it wants to be
an energy from itself
a trapped mini energy.

Millions and millions
of years go by.
Countless of energy's
live in the sky.

An ability of thought
came to be...
from so much free
en-er-gy.

The sprinkles of light
which formed into many...
still lived in the dark...
the darkness was plenty.

A war began
from dark and light.
It would go on
this war of fights.

The power of light
the power of dark
the powers which formed
our human hearts.

Together they agreed
to make you and me.
To let us decide
from whom is our seed.

So torn we will be
for all eternity...
As the light and the dark
fight within you and me.

Reviews

[Blood Ink Diary]

Another gorgeous poem - your ink is shimmering !

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you again. I appreciate the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

This is a powerful write that reminds me of Genesis or creation stories . I like all the elements of nature that you use to enhance you ideas...:)

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thanks Sami. I am a firm believer in creation through a powerful energy most call God and I believe that we are all connected, people, animals, elements.

[Sami Khalil]

I do too. You are welcome...:)