Beautiful Fiend

Most vile lover, most loving man

My heart breaks and leaps with joy.

Flesh bending to your will,

Breath stolen with your kiss,

Dark creature taunting me,

My desire guiding me,

Shadowed beauty drawing me ever closer,

Haunting whispers floating in my ear,

Time fleeting too quickly to bear,

Rain matters not, for you are my sun,

When you are with me,

Bittersweet are the moments

But they are mine and what I may have.

When you are gone...

My heart cries out in sorrow

Joy is difficult to find.

The memory of your touch lingers upon my flesh

Maddening, vile, loving beauty.

Foul, hateful, cherished kisses linger upon my lips

Angel, dark and wonderful pulling me ever closer.

I am yours only for want of asking.

And yet, in the shadows and darkness of my night

My spirit reaches out for that which I desire most,

The beautiful fiend who has returned to my dreams.

Reviews

[sakshi arora]

cute simple nice poem perfect length

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Aw ha, i thought it first said friend then realized it was fiend. '-) Very clever & ingenious. Your words ring out with ears that hear, Cuz' I too have been there. Well written Gypsie

Blessingss to you
anne

[Gypsie]

Thank you so much, yes I believe that this is not solitary and many have found themselves so torn.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAnne]

unfortunately...I agree

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is full of heartache and intense longing.Very heartfelt and splendidly penned :)

[Gypsie]

I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome )

[Sami Khalil]

"in the shadows and darkness of my night
My spirit reaches out for that which I desire most,
The beautiful fiend who has returned to my dreams."

Elegantly written with bitter sweetness of love and friendship. Bravo.................

[Gypsie]

Well, thank you for this review. It is most appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Chris]

I liked the taste of darkness defined here. Drawing, tempting... the ease of the flow. The allure and WANT.

[Gypsie]

Thank you I appreciate your thoughts

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Justin]

beautiful! will be checking out more work