Desire

Dark desire rises from somewhere deep within

Pulling me, drawing me down a path I both want and despise.

 

Breathing in the warmth of your breath as it lightly dances against my skin

My mind abandons all hope of reprieve.

 

Looking into the depths of your eyes like endless chocolate pools

Forcing me into an abyss that could be my undoing.

 

Feeling the heat of your touch as your hands caress my body

I yield to your thoughts, giving in; bending to your every whim.

 

The truth that lies within begins to surface as I accept what and who I am

Passion spills forth from some unknown fount taking over thoughts and deeds.

 

Completely, undeniably I give into the force rising up, taking over

Drinking in the richness that lies here; becoming one with the moment.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Desire met within a lover's arms--I pray every human being in the world has one moment like this; there's far too much loneliness out there. The words of this poem are really provocative "Drinking in the richness that lies here; becoming one with the moment" there's so many meanings to that simple line, all of them accurate and equally true, that it's downright scary

[A. Amos]

Completely, undeniably I give into the force rising up, taking over
Drinking in the richness that lies here; becoming one with the moment.

Neatly crafted and you have a beautiful poet in you, above verses were essence my friend...good job

[Gypsie]

Well, thank you.. Now if only I could find that poet again. She's been missing for awhile.

[SkinlessFrank]

Yes, desire is like a living creature that lives within, and can not be easily tamed. I like the way you give life to this beast/angel.

[Antonio Valentino]

Dark desire rises from somewhere deep within

Pulling me, drawing me down a path I both want and despise.

Very truthful.

Enjoyed this very much.
Antonio