Horrid Love

Just a little ditty

O, hateful life-Despised lover, who comes to me in the dark of night.

What is it of me you ask?  How can I be what you want ?

The memory of your touch is beautiful madness coursing through me.

Every breath filled with the insanity of desire.

Haunting bliss, every moment a century in my soul,

I curse each time I see you with two-fold blessings;

Wanting you and detesting what I am.

Shadow of darkness giving light to my dreams;

Wolvish angel, filling my heart with foolish abandon.

Loathed saintly dragon, thief of most honorable intentions;

Stealing that which is precious to me.

Beautiful fiend, most horrid love;

That which eats away reviled flesh

Leaving only the love it begets.

 

 

 

 

 

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[A. Amos]

This one is classic and simply epic, very beautiful concept and you portray very well.

[JCP]

I do like the "classical" feel it has to it, darkened with a splash of the supernatural.

[Matthew Kult]

I am loving the old fashioned style, i like the classical feel. I love the surrounding drama and sense of honest and truth that comes from the piece. Excellent write.

Regards,

Matthew