Twenty Four

To hold you for an hour, is my poison indeed.

To kiss your lips, a venom that I clearly need.

Whispers soft and wonderful, licking at my ear.

Your hands against my body, a burden I must bear.

Twenty four hours, just to show you my heart.

Twenty four hours, I know we must part.

To touch you in a way, I know that you desire.

To feel your flesh against me, makes internal fire.

Nothing between us, madness takes hold.

Forgiveness, I beg for being so bold.

Twenty four hours, just to show you my heart.

Twenty four hours, I know we must part.

Reviews

[zainul]

The time limit of "Twenty four hours"is very interesting.
It is less than twelve hours and includes the day beyond the night.
It seems a special time limit that is meant only for you.
Love the rhymed piece that evokes many many thoughts.

Thanks for sharing the splendid work.

[Gypsie]

Thank you so much for your review. I am happy that you enjoyed it.

[zainul]

It was really a great pleasure of mine.

[ewest1220]

Very sensual and well written.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I love this one of yours and to discover your sensual parts is my gift xx