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This is just a little idea that popped into my head and I thought that I would see u guy's opinions about it.

The little pup wandered blindly through the cold terrain. His eyes were still sealed shut and his nose was still closed. It was the middle of the Cold Season, and he had been left alone after his mother had died. His two sisters were bumping along with him, and they all struggled together. His paw slipped into nothingness. He hastily scrambled back, and stood in front of his two sisters. He barked once sharply to them, to let them know not to continue.

Author's Note

I need suggestins for a title and just let me know if this could be a story. Thanks so much guys!

Reviews

[Summer'sBreeze]

glad i could help ^-^

[Gwyn]

sounds great to me!

[Summer'sBreeze]

Hunter Lost?
sorry just the first thing that popped into my mind

[Gwyn]

thanks, got any ideas for a title?

[Summer'sBreeze]

i think it could work it's way into a story

great write