First Kill

A poem about wolves and their wantings.

The Pack, so silent and deadly;

Always watching, forever hungry;

Waiting for their chance;

To make their first kill;

They yearn for blood;

Saliva dripping from their muzzles;

Don't become;

Their first kill.

Author's Note

Again, any comments welcome.

Reviews

[emma]

ooo! i liked it! the rhymes were all perfect and i really liked how it all came together with the last sentence! yay! it was short, but still incredibly descriptive. awesome write!

[Summer'sBreeze]

really good
I love your work
(mostly because it's based off of the Shiver series) :)

[Ian]

From your description I'm not sure I would want to become "Their first kill."
Great job!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow this is amazing! i love this :)) mind checking out some of my work? thanks :)