May God Keep My Soul

Not really sure what this is...not really a story, but just emotions that needed to go somewhere

I lie here in the loudest pain I have ever heard, with the sound of my tears dripping in splashes that rival the roar of the ocean wave.  I feel myself melting away as if a candle in the dessert sun, feeling myself going, much to quickly, wanting to stop it, but I have no control.  No one is listening, no one is there.  No one can listen because I no long exist. Colors explode all around me, they are vivid and beautiful.  They carry all my emotions, and as I become wrapped up in the beauty, too late I realize they are my dreams, my nightmares, my hopes, my fears, my desires, my dreads,  my loves, my distains, my entire being, floating, then flying away faster and faster from me until all that is left if the total absence of anything.  I am only aware of falling through the emptiness, afraid that I will eventually come to the end of it all, but it goes on and on, the falling and the nothingness, until I realize what I fear the most is not the end but falling through the emptiness that will never end.

Reviews

[Paza]

The pain that permeates all the senses...so heart-wrenching and real.