Hello In There

 

Hello in there, hello in there

Do you care, do you care?

It’s me again! It’s me, just Gwen!

But look close my friend she is not there

You see just her face, her smile, her hair

She is hurt and all crumpled up inside

The part that loved has all but died

She floats away within her dreams

The her you see is not at all what it seems

She smiles by day and cries by night

Sleep only comes after a tremendous fight

She clings tight to those she loves and hugs and kisses

These are the things in life that she most terribly misses

The world is so dark and empty when her eyes do close

She prays it will not be dark when she finally goes

So remember when you see her smiling face

That she is floating loose in some other place

You must climb deep inside to find the Her in there

Touch her hand, her heart, let her know you care

Hello in there, Hello in there!

Do you care, do you care?

Reviews

[Paza]

What an emotional piece. Reminds me of looking in the mirror at myself not too long ago. "The part that loved has all but died..." Touches such a raw nerve. Beautiful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow very gut wrenching work, the loneliness is so very ell expressed and the need for acceptance even though you wish you didn't want it. It's all a cruel part of human nature... first thing I've read from you and I am very impressed.

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this. It's catchy. Good work! :D