I Saw You Gazing

I saw you gazing

at the girl

in pink.

She simply loves those summer days;

when rays

pat the verdant grass

and glitter on the tranquil seas. 

When birds sing in harmony

together with the breeze.

They love

she loves such beaty--

angelic at her core.

Smiles to the sad

and offers money to the poor.

I saw you gazing 

at the girl

in pink

without a single

blink.

So you choked 

from envy

by this human 

who is filled with

light;

for you my dear

a creature

darker than the night.

Reviews

[~]

The root of envy breeds bitter fruit for us to eat all life long.. a poignant write, and i like the two tones.
:D

[guy drori]

Thank you!...I'm very glad you liked it. And I agree with you that envy breeds bitter fruit for us to eat all life long...

[~]

you are welcome :D

[W R Stowe]

We are what we are mere mortal man an imperfect being so often envy to be someone else but are not be thankful for what you have and perhaps God will grant you more

[guy drori]

Thank you for your comment :)

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[Chris D.]

Thanks for planting such a beautiful thought within my mind..:) You do have a green thumb my friend and I'm clearing a spot within my dreams for future seeds.. Nice write!!

[guy drori]

Thank you for you kind words Chris! Appreciate it...and I'm very glad you liked it :)