Rebel

Rebel

A Poem by Drew

 

where to go

when all the world hates

what to do

with no voice in debates

when do you

fight for your rights

the world is coming to an end

it's time to let the rules bend

© 2008 Drew


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AWESOME.....5 stars....wait is that the highest the stars go up? Its simple but it tells alot. I wish the world go have no rules at all. Screw the bending thing. No rules at all is better

Posted 16 Years Ago
It felt a little choppy to me, but I enjoyed the overall tone and message of the poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on November 10, 2008

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Drew
Drew

Almont, MI



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I'm 20, living in Almont, Michigan. I work tons, and leave the rest to school. I go to Macomb Community College and am technically in my second semester. I love to write but often fail to reach the fi.. more..

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