Pillar of Strength

 

when the bad days come

and you feel like a beaten drum

when all the world hates

ever altering all of our fates

when i am alone

and the worlds evil i've been shown

won't you be

that special person for me?

 

the light in the darkness

the lines on the atlas

the northmost star

the holy aethiest alter

my cain

my evil tame

for me will you see

and help guide me

 

without you i will fail

like on the cold stone i fell

once before and not again

this is the time to rebegin

i can try and stand on my own

the only way i could hope to atone

but now i need you

don't you need me too?

Reviews

[Jules]

The title is very exact label of what the poem symbolises! well done! The poem shows quite well determination and force of mind needed when in "peril", doubt and in melancholy...when something hard comes our way, we fight! this poem describes this well and also shows the futility of life without love, people...
well done!