Paradise Running
A Book by Gunslingerg000
 Rodrik has had feelings for Prim since childhood and things seem like their about to heat up when he finally decides to let her know how he feels on their schoolastic group takes a trip to the rainfor  © 2015 Gunslingerg000
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a little sample at possiblly writing romance. hope you enjoy and will continue to add
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Excellent foundation Bruce! I particularly am a fan of your vivid imager, specifically the way that you use your words to bring across an idea the way you've pictured it. Also the relationship between the characters seems so real, and their situation is all too relatable :P. There's a few minor punctuation issues, but all in all this preview was a fantastic read! I'm looking forward to seeing how Rodrik and Prim's relationship develops over the course of the novel. Keep up the good work! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Excellent foundation Bruce! I particularly am a fan of your vivid imager, specifically the way that you use your words to bring across an idea the way you've pictured it. Also the relationship between the characters seems so real, and their situation is all too relatable :P. There's a few minor punctuation issues, but all in all this preview was a fantastic read! I'm looking forward to seeing how Rodrik and Prim's relationship develops over the course of the novel. Keep up the good work! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Gunslingerg000allentown , PA
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I've been writing for a long time, i love writing and creating a world that no ones ever seen before. since i am still a novice i read a lot to help influence my works and draw a lot from my life expe.. more..
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