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A Poem by GunMetal
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Répondez s'il vous plaît. I never knew before today.

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There's a party in this poem,
and everyone is drunk,
and spelling s**t rong.

© 2012 GunMetal


Author's Note

GunMetal
I could call it a haiku, because everyone in this poem is drunk enough to believe it, but I guess you guys would call me out on it huh? Ah, well.

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awesome simple sweet and wonderful nice work

Posted 12 Years Ago


hahah xD cool

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hi GunMetal,

Like the poem. Lots of fun. But I am calling you out on the Haiku thing:

Poem describes party,
Where all are so damn drunk,
They spell things rong.

This gave me a smile.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice story, I like it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a great piece. Hehe I liked it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Luv it ;) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


'Rong' is wrong on purpose, so even though it's wrong spelled 'rong' it's right to be 'rong'. =P

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes...I think....
rong should be....wrong..
anyway....nice cute little poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


rong should be wrong lol

Drunken spelling, almost as bad as drunken calling, texting, or driving...

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is one cool poem.
Simple, but hits like a mack truck. lol.
I have no idea how you took 3 lines and
triggered so many things in my imagination.
Bravo.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Wish You Were Here, Alta Loma, CA



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