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GunMetal
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I never knew before today.
There's a party in this poem,
and everyone is drunk,
and spelling s**t rong.
© 2012 GunMetal
Author's Note
I could call it a haiku, because everyone in this poem is drunk enough to believe it, but I guess you guys would call me out on it huh? Ah, well.
Reviews
awesome simple sweet and wonderful nice work
Posted 12 Years Ago
hahah xD cool
Posted 12 Years Ago
hahah xD cool
Hi GunMetal,
Like the poem. Lots of fun. But I am calling you out on the Haiku thing:
Poem describes party,
Where all are so damn drunk,
They spell things rong.
This gave me a smile.
Best regards,
Rick
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hi GunMetal,
Like the poem. Lots of fun. But I am calling you out on the Haiku thing:
Poem describes party,
Where all are so damn drunk,
They spell things rong.
This gave me a smile.
Best regards,
Rick
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nice story, I like it. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice story, I like it. :)
This was a great piece. Hehe I liked it :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
This was a great piece. Hehe I liked it :D
Luv it ;) xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
Luv it ;) xx
'Rong' is wrong on purpose, so even though it's wrong spelled 'rong' it's right to be 'rong'. =P
Posted 13 Years Ago
'Rong' is wrong on purpose, so even though it's wrong spelled 'rong' it's right to be 'rong'. =P
yes...I think....
rong should be....wrong..
anyway....nice cute little poem
Posted 13 Years Ago
yes...I think....
rong should be....wrong..
anyway....nice cute little poem
rong should be wrong lol
Drunken spelling, almost as bad as drunken calling, texting, or driving...
Posted 13 Years Ago
rong should be wrong lol
Drunken spelling, almost as bad as drunken calling, texting, or driving...
This is one cool poem.
Simple, but hits like a mack truck. lol.
I have no idea how you took 3 lines and
triggered so many things in my imagination.
Bravo.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is one cool poem.
Simple, but hits like a mack truck. lol.
I have no idea how you took 3 lines and
triggered so many things in my imagination.
Bravo.
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