Just Getting Started

'Comments' Poetry... because of Writerski7.

Smooth

 

You changed my life…

and then you changed it back.

 

Smooth move.

 

 

Hey Girls

 

Stop getting boyfriends.

It makes it really difficult to hit on you.

Wait until I’m dating one of you,

and then carry on.

 

 

Reiterate

 

Sometimes I'll hear a song

I used to hate,

and think to myself, "Wow,

this really makes me wanna stab myself in the ear.

Still."

 

 

Sunrise

 

So, I was watching the sunrise,

and it dawned on me.

 

 

To Those It May Concern

 

Be polite and tip pizza delivery drivers well…

They know where you live.

Author's Note

Grain of salt, my friends.

Reviews

[deadly healer]

i was laughing the whole time i was reading this as well. i thought the girl part was kinda funny. and it is true that pizza delivery guys do know where you live. lol. i adored this poem. hardly anything makes me laugh anymore and you proved that i actully can still laugh. thanks for that btw. i love your work. its cool to have a break from all the stress for once and be able to read this hilarious stuff. keep writing dude. ur awesome.

[zombiikillah666]

hahahahaah....omgosh..hahaha. i looove the part about , wow, this makes me want to stab myself in the ear....lmao. that was great. :D Awh, sometimes i dont tip, cause im broke....i shouldnt have bought the pizza.....im scared now.. *chews on popcorn* i like this. good write. (: *turns on nirvana.*

[GunMetal]

Possibly =)
I wrote the last one because my best friend delivers pizza, lol.

[Night Edge]

Ahh, I love poetry with a little bit of sense to it.
Especially that last one. You can never trust those guys.

Great job. They flow well and they made me laugh. Any chance there'll be more?

[Ruth]

You know, this is an excellent and unsettling piece of work hon!
Disparate elements woven here with a tension that is awesome. A little observation of the world of a person who thinks a lot! Great write, love it! xx